Song writing skillz...

I wrote 2 songs this year well...these couple of months...pls. tell me what u think...

Title: No Ordinary

No more sweet melodies
No more wishing for it to end
No more calling just to say
goodnight and see you tomorrow

No Ordinary love
waiting your arrival
No Ordinary Love
waiting at the door
No Ordinary Love
to come knockin' at your door
just to say " I Love You"
No Ordinary Love who will apologize in the rain
just for you...

Bridge:
No more fights,No more pains
No more tears,No more screams
It's time to let you go
time to let you know
It's over, It's done
we're through...

Title: --no title yet -- (still in the works)

Why does it hurt so much?
loosing you was such a mistake
why did i do it?
why? why? why? why?
It hurts so much without you
why did i leave you?
how could i be so dumb enough
not to notice you....oh...

i'm sorry i hurt you
i'm sorry i left you behind
why didn't i notice you before?
why? why?
now we're apart
and it hurts too much...
How can i live without
your love
i'm sorry for all the pain
i've cost you...oh...

just wanted to share that...pls. tell me wat u think!! tnx..